Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
My third elevator pitch was an interesting one. I was traveling for work again and my best opportunity was at LGA, so I went for it. I took advice from my previous pitch and shortened the pitch, not including all the technical details I included before that made it run so long. That advice stood out as important. It wasn't all that surprising but I took it to heart. I do still need to include the technical details, because that's where all the glory is, so I made reference to a fictitious website.
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Hey Warren,
ReplyDeleteI didn't see your first post but It seems like you've summed up your video =, producing a shower pitch. It seem like your busy and i completely understand but the only advice for this vdeo would be to maybe stand still. Other than that i like the shout out to the fake website.
Hey Warren,
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great product! I think the pitch was informative and very interesting! I do not own a pool, but I have many friends who would benefit from this idea. Keep up the good work and I think your idea can some day revolutionize the way we maintain our backyard swimming pools.
Hi Warren!
ReplyDeleteI thought it took a lot too do a pitch like this in a public place because I know I would never personally be able to do that. The only thing is the video is pretty shakey which could be easily fixed to improve your pitch! As far as your idea goes I think it's pretty creative and a lot of people would be able to benefit from it. I also thought the shout out to the website was a unique and good idea. Check out mine at http://courtneyncostello.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey I think you made a great call on your modifications!. Even though I haven't seen your previous ones I think this is a great example of a pitch. It was to the point condensed with information but not overwhelming. Really cool. Here's my post : Kevinramos910.blogspot.com
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